I sat down on Thursday night and realized that the perspective and proportions were all horribly wrong. Apparently sketching out works much better for me than rough blobs. This looks a lot better.
Also, if you're wondering just how obnoxiously complicated the fabric pattern is, here's a close up. I love this print, but there is no way on this earth I am replicating it for this drawing. Maybe some simplified pattern with a similar color, but definitely not this.