Friday, August 9, 2013

Week 31 Gets Sharp

As per the suggestion of some of my lovely readers I removed the green and added some actual thorns. I'm not sure of the word "Thorns" looks quite right yet, but I felt like adding thorns to it would have been over-kill and made it difficult to read. Thoughts?

2 comments:

  1. Nice! I love the thorns. And as for the word 'thorns' the way it is right now is really working for me cause it looks like when you have a rose bush that scrapes against a window and over time it leaves etchings when the wind pushes it around. Also looks like a person scratching their arm with a thorn. I liked the other way you had written it too but I think this scratchiness really works.

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