Thursday, August 8, 2013

Week 31, Maybe?

So I did most of this quick before work this morning. There's a lot about it that I like, but a lot that I don't. I never took graphic design so if there's some basic rules chances are high that I don't know them. So even though it looks done, I'm going to sleep on it and see if anyone gives me feedback on improving it and making it look less... I dunno, corny maybe?

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  1. I think that you need thorns in it - thicken up the font of the R and the S and the S (keep the cute cute rose!) and have thorns coming out like barbed wire maybe - kill the green I'd say. If you want accent colors, go with the red. That is my opinion since you asked for feedback. I like the font and I love the rose. But yeah since thorns (and the sharpness and danger they represent) are such a big thing thematically, then you really need to show them in the title graphic.

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    1. Thanks Amanda! I think you're 100% correct

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    2. You're welcome and I can't wait to see how what you decide to do to work on it. And I'm excited to see some more of the webcomic! ^^

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  2. I agree with Amanda, thorns rather than vines and lose the green. No get on it so I can see it!

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